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Avatar: Bringing Out the Blue Fancomic page 10

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A fancomic of a scene from the A:TLA fanfiction, Bringing Out the Blue by maguena1. Go check it out at fanfiction.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/6904038/1…

"AU. The arrow injured the Blue Spirit instead of knocking him out, and Aang never found out his identity. Zuko made a Plan to find out more about the Avatar. He didn't expect so many truths to come from the lies."

This scene is from chapter 2.

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Still working on those limestone caves! I had to cut up the dialogue a bit to make it fit, but I think it works pretty well. I am going to make more pages, but I am also doing my Master's thesis, so it might take some time ;)
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maguena
Yes, the dialogue works very well.  I am verbose - I'm always working on cutting that down with variable success - so I'm personally extra impressed by the skill with which you make it fit the comic :-)  As for the background, I think it looks best in the 'yeah,yeah' panel - that soft streaky look.  Favorite moment in the next to last panel, with Sokka's wide-eyed panic.  I do have to say, this is the one page where sometimes the faces look off to me - Katara's in particular.  Not sure if it's the proportions or what.